Khoai-Chanさんのレビュー一覧

Warning: this drama contains non-consensual sex, drug, manipulation and imprisonment. If you don't like that, then this is not for you!

Wow I was not expecting that there would be a story to this. I came in expecting this to be all lewd with no plot, then I came out with mixed emotions at the end. I'm not excusing what the ML did to the FL and his way of expressing his love, but they're quite pitiful in their own ways. The story shows how love and resentment and can cause one to be twisted. But I'm glad to see their problems get somewhat resolved with a fitting ending where it's not exactly a happy ending, but it's not sad either.

Among the 3 chapters, this one feels the most abrupt in the FL's character development due to the time skip. Although the second chapter drops some hints to her eventual transformation, the flow of the story feels a bit off going from FL gets drugged and resists ML's advances to her being drug free and is acting on "her own will" (how much of that is true is up to your speculation). Perhaps adding a bit more context/flashback regarding to the changes that happened between the time skip would improve the flow of the story better.

Props to the VA for doing such an amazing job at portraying ML's complex emotions especially toward the end where everything gets revealed, and his voice is exactly like how I imagine to be for this kind of story (dayum sexy oji-san). This series uses the appropriate placement and amount of sound effects to not distract the listener, but I do wish that they would include some "papapa" sound in the background when they do it as it would create a more immersive experience (but of course, this is just a personal preference).

Last but not least, thank you VerdelishJP for the translation. It's not very common for audio drama to get translated, so I really appreciate for the opportunity to enjoy this mini series. I'm looking forward to seeing more English translated audio dramas for female audience.

As expected of an erotica piece, there's not much plot in the story overall but it's an interesting take on Muzan and the listener's fun night. The script on Google doc is great, but when producing it into an audio drama it needs further refinement. Certain areas of the story feel awkward especially when the VA tries to narrate what's happening as Muzan (e.g. the fingering and BJ scenes). It would be an engaging way to make the listener's experience more intimate, but the way it was executed doesn't work in some situations. In those scenes, it would work better simply as narration rather than dialogue.

My biggest issue with this drama is the discrepancies between the audio and the Google doc script. For example when Muzan is face fucking FL, the script says "Occasionally, through his breaths, you hear the sounds of his moaning, yet it isn’t as frequent as he often remained quiet” but the VA does the opposite of what is described. And it was weird that Muzan sounded as if he was on the verge of climax instead of FL when he fingered her. Another thing I find it weird is the use of the phrase "ask you one thing" by Muzan. As a proud, superior being, it doesn't seem to be in character of him to say that and the places where that phrase is used doesn't really make sense story wise.

The VA's voice fits pretty well as Muzan, and he did a good job for the most part. I think he could have done a much better job with better directing. Another thing I wish the VA could have done is differentiate when he's speaking as Muzan vs when he's speaking as narrator to make it easier for listener to understand. Many audiobook does this where the narrator changes their voice slightly between narration and dialogue. The VA frequently rereads certain lines and I'm not sure if that was supposed to get edited out but that also makes the flow of the story a bit weird.

Overall, this drama is pretty decent with rooms for improvement. But for this kind of quality, it is a bit pricey imo.