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Pickup!The BEST First-Time Story I've Ever Seen!

Aug/14/2008  

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Hakoniwa
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$9.58 / 1,080JPY
Download version of the doujinshi that went on sale in 2007.
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  • Release: Jun/18/2008
  • Purchased: 19x

Tachibana overhears some of the guys bad mouthing his classmate Tokioka saying he's such a money-grubber that he'll even do it with GUYS! That afternoon on the way to gym class, Tachibana stumbles across Tokioka doing another boy in the storage shed, panics after getting an eyeful, and drops his headband (with his name on it!) as he runs off to class. His teacher thinks he looks ill and asks the class monitor—none other than Tokioka—to take him to the nurse's office! Tachibana gets all shy and embarrassed but asks about the rumor. Tokioka confirms it and asks Tachibana if he wants to give it a try. Of course, he's nowhere near ready for something that big...

Later on his way home, he sees Tokioka and the boy from the shed "breaking up". Unable to fight his growing desires and curiosity, he makes the fateful snap-decision to go home with Tokioka.

That's essentially the story. The artwork is done in a smooth, sketchy style with what looks like gray marker pens, giving it an almost watercolor feel—really nice. Tachibana especially is really cute and Tokioka is both cute and sexy (even the "bottom boy" from the shed's a cutie).

The big payoff, of course is the 11 PAGES of sex at Tokioka's house, which is REALLY hot. This story—more than any other I've ever seen—totally captures the intense feeling you get in your chest when you do it the very first time, yet still conveys the innocence of the experience beautifully. It actually gave ME that feeling again as I put myself in Tachibana's place (and BOY would I like to be in his place...)

I think this is a beautiful story and HIGHLY recommend it for both the art and for those who enjoy a realistic, hot, first-time sex story.

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